Kf-School 1.1 (Download Page 4!)

[kai]

As you can see, this is my first post in this forum concerning my first map ever made. I spent about a month for it because I'm a editor noob and this is my first attempt. Well, I uploaded some pictures, I am looking forward for feedback. ;D




The outside of the school. It has two floors, the ground floor and a dark, dark cellar



I was about to get jumped from behind right there.



The "ol´shoppe" (in the dark cellar mentioned before) I guess I spent most of the time making this room


edit: Okay since Laramee Lestaria offered her beta testing I will post my map here, I hope you´ll enjoy! files.filefront.com//;5964499;;/

[Seras Victoria]

Not bad, seeing it is your first map, trader shop looks kinda good

If you need testing you've come to the right place here ^-^

[Abyx]

Woah, lookin pretty damn good there for a first map.

Can't wait to play it sometime,

[Hayato]

Interesting, does that shopkeeper have a kevelar vest on and a winchester strapped on her back?

[kai]

noo, i Have godlike photoshop skills but seriously.. she actually does, but the stuff doesnt move when she does.. I think its still a nice effect, I mean she is a gunshopkeeper and has nothing of her stuff on her? Thats like a skinny butcher.

[mrmedic]

*Thumbs up*

[BIGJohnMP]

As soon as I can get your map from FileFront I would like to play it. Sometimes FileFront just doesn't want to give up files...

[kyben]

Doesn't look bad for a first map. Don't know how scary it will be in the daytime. But then again, no map has scared me at night. I'll check it out later when I got time.

[BIGJohnMP]

I didn't get to play it a whole lot, but it seems fairly well done. Good job! I'll let your know if I find any exploits or horrible bugs.

[zombieButcher]

Lmao the Trader got pimped/rambo'd.

[BIGJohnMP]

That bitch is badass now, but I'd still do her...

[keybob]

polygon sex... gross man.

[tronicmind]

this is your first map?
WOW
i like it here are my pros and cons.

pros:
+ good atmo. the shool-feeling worx quiet good.
+ good scaling. right between to narrow to fight and to wide to feel strange.
+ good layout. the zeds flow good in this map. nice escape option for the player.
+well placed weapon-spawns imo

cons:
- to less ammo-spawns
-cellar is to dark to be playable. solution: add some lightsources like:
flikering lamps
a brocken fusebox with flikering sparks
burning things like gas pipes or furniture
-some bot-route issues
-some design-issues
BUT i think that normal for a first time ever UED-map

here are some suggestions for goodlook-korrektions:











i hope that helps
keep up the good work ;D

[kai]

wooow! tronicmind thanks a lot! your motivating me. Well, First thing I am going to do is lighting up the cellar.. Hey warte.. bist ja Deutscher! Egal, I keep on speaking English.
Soo, I´ll start to fix it and do a 1.1 asap. My problem is that I want the characters to be able to jump out of the windows, worked with UT2004 but now with KF, the characters just get stuck. Does anyone have advice for that?

[uwasawaya]

Cracked up over the floating chair for some reason.

Anyway, looks fun! I'd be honored to try it out!