Download Horzine Map to try please!

[KiCk3R]

Hi just finshed a beta version of the map... like i said before,
this is my first map ever and i would like you all to try it!
please give me feedback on what could be changed, or if you think something sucks tell me

thank yoouuu

www.savefile.com/files/965301

NEW NEW NEW BETA WITH ALL YOUR SUGGESTIONS IN!
THANK YOU FOR HELP :

Link : www.savefile.com/files/971091

[Bindal]

Screenshots? Description?

[KiCk3R]

I would add screen shots if i had a webserver or an account to upload them with.

Or the alternitive it to add me on msn and il upload them :S

[Bindal]

www.imageshack.us

a good page to upload images.

[KiCk3R]

Oh awsome,
Here is one photo them lol.


This is in the Elevator room.

And this is the Lobby,



and one more room to show... the Tourture room.


I need feedback

[Bindal]

Nice map. The Idea with the destroyed elevator, wich works is funny and the room, wich you reach only through another makes it realistic.

But in next verison, you should add a few more weapon and one or two ammospawns and remove the "Only Hunties"-Spawn.
And you need a sky.
The green switches could be a bit smaller too, but they are ok.

Edit:

What the hell is that? A giant lasergun? The world greates green Neonlight? Zombieshit?

[KiCk3R]

lol ... ahh the green neon.
Im not too sure what that is meant to be.
I like to think of it as "Radiation" like the announser is talking about in the other room.

The shotties can go, i added that so i would'nt get pwnd when developing
And agreed, it does need more random ammo spawns.
Thanks

[Doyora]

I vote for a diso room

This is unusualy acomplished for a first map

[Seras Victoria]

From the screenies I can say you might want to darken the litgthing a bit and perhaps change the color a bit to orange/blue
(green for the radiation) To make it more moody
I'll try it out

[KiCk3R]

lol @ Doyora
perhaps i could add a easter egg disco room somewhere in the map lol.

This is my first map on a UT editior.
Anyone used Worldcraft / Hammer editor before?

Infact ... is anyone up for making a map together.
would be awsome to have someone elses opinion and ideas for a new map

[[AM]Echo 419]

Ive tried to use Hammer but Ive noticed that I have grown in one with Unreal Ed and cant learn another level editor